Ch7 Page 9

February 19, 2015

Ch7 Page 11

February 19, 2015

7 Thoughts on Ch 7 Page 10

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  1. Oh noes! Poor Oriana!! Don’t bottle it in poor dear!

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  2. I can definitely understand where Duckie is coming from, and I can see why he’s being a butt (though I disagree with him acting the way he has been) I just wish he would approach his own feelings in a more constructive way xP Which, of course, doesn’t happen all the time and that makes this realistic. Maybe after this outburst, Duckie will approach Oriana in a different way….;-; i just want them to be happy! That’s all I want! D’x

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  3. Aw no, those expressions. :C The emotion in your drawing comes off really really strong, especially when Duckie kind of realises “Oh shoot, I’ve gone too far now.” T____T

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    • When I was drawing up this page I was actually distorting my face trying to figure out how their face would look ^^; Sometimes I’d do it without realizing and then I’ll wonder why does my face hurt so much and come to find out I’ve been frowing for the past 30 minutes because of the drama and emotions XD

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  4. I just bust into tears and my heart broke…..fix it :’O Great pages! In this one page, I felt like Duckie’s expression is showing what I feel. Not about what Oriana said ( though that is probably what cause the tears) but my opinion of him has suddenly changed from “he’s being unnecessarily cruel to her” to something i’m not sure how to put into words but it’s positive. I hope he and Oriana can get along better in the future.

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    On page 8, I wasn’t sure if you meant to put “fun” when Oriana thinks “I’m happy for Krisa, but seeing how much fun they’re having together makes me…” and Page 9, “You never use to “be” so closed off when we were kids”

    Keep up the good work!!!!!

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    • I’m so Janyx!! Q^Q I just finished updating 4 more pages and they’re not going to be much better! Hang in there with me!!
      But I just makes me so happy to see you all noticing the expressions because when I draw them I get so worried that it isn’t coming off strong enough or correctly but this right here brings such a smile to my face <3 You awesome jelly bean you!
      Also thank you for helping me spot my word hiccups. I read through the pages and imagine a word being there when it isn't ^^; my brain can be such a fuddy-duddy but I have you guys looking out for me <3 <3 thank youuuu~uuu

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